New Day (3 word Wed post)


 

The clock says four but the rooster is adamant

With his raucous nasal alarm

Town folks arise with musical notes

But ours are more peculiar on the farm

The dark roast is dripping in the pot,

My mate has seemingly risen with ease.

Wonder if I could fabricate a headache

And snuggle down for a few more zzz’s?

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About Iris D

Pastor, former youth pastor who writes skits, devotionals, poems,and short stories. Won awards on short stories and poetry, and have published both poetry and non-fiction.

10 responses to “New Day (3 word Wed post)

  1. Easy to imagine especially the adamant rooster. I love the flow of this piece.

  2. I love this. Especially that first line.

  3. Such a great use of adamant, it fits a rooster perfectly! … it reads with such ese.

  4. you can picture it all and the snuggle down for a few more minutes describes how some of us feel.

  5. Beautifully done. I can just smell the dark roast dripping in the pot.

  6. What a wonderful descriptive scene and the ending sounds just right because I’d like to stay in that scene, too!

  7. 🙂 i can understand your feelings. i hate the rooster’s howl 🙂

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/04/08/the-visitor-for-3ww/

  8. Love it! Sunggling in for a few more zzzz’s sounds good almost anytime! Poem on …

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